The tank dosnt seem to go with the robot. The crazy amount of detail on the robot is amzing, awesome job, but the lack of detail in the tank almost takes away from your piece as a whole.
The line art on the robot/mech/whatever is amzing, awesome job, evrything seems to work and looks great. my only problem with it is all the lines are weighted the same. They all ahve the same thinckness, now it sure looks nice, but in a professional drawing the lines that are closer to the viewer should be weighted a bit more to give it some depth. Trust me, try it, youll be amazed at how much just thickening those closer lines will do for your drawing.
I like this although the tank has 5 wheels while the mech has only 4 main wheels and the wheels are a tad squint but apart from that sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet
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The tank dosnt seem to go with the robot. The crazy amount of detail on the robot is amzing, awesome job, but the lack of detail in the tank almost takes away from your piece as a whole.
The line art on the robot/mech/whatever is amzing, awesome job, evrything seems to work and looks great. my only problem with it is all the lines are weighted the same. They all ahve the same thinckness, now it sure looks nice, but in a professional drawing the lines that are closer to the viewer should be weighted a bit more to give it some depth. Trust me, try it, youll be amazed at how much just thickening those closer lines will do for your drawing.
Keep it up man, this is freakin rad as hell!
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